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Donna Kozik
Freelance Copywriter & Consultant
Phone: 619/297-1749
E-mail: Donna@DonnaKozik.com
Web site: http://www.DonnaKozik.com 

Writing sample from Agent Exchange magazine, a publication for Erie Insurance Agents

© Erie Insurance Group 

The Phone Ranger 

What can two hours and a telephone get you? 

A lot of business, according to Charles Groesbeck, a 19-year veteran of the insurance industry.  “The competitive auto market is creating a tremendous opportunity for agents to sell ERIE products with the help of their friend, the phone,” said Charles, a member of the Bill Flinn Insurance Agency in Bethel Park, Pa. 

Q:  Why do you hold such strong faith in telemarketing?

A:  It’s quick, it’s easy, it’s inexpensive, it’s different – and it works!  Many companies are soliciting through the mail, but I’m the only agent calling.  There’s no replacement for that two-way communication with prospects.  I focus on selling ERIE’s homeowner’s and auto policies, but another bonus is that I get a lot of life leads.  People will even say, “I’m not really interested in car insurance, but do you sell life insurance?”

Q:  What are the “musts” of successful telemarketing?

A:  Be very straightforward with the products you are selling and keep conversations brief.  I open with “I’m Charles Groesbeck, with Erie Insurance here in Bethel Park,” so people know I’m right in their neighborhood.  Once the person expresses interest, the most important thing is to get the expiration date.  Then I file the x-dates and call interested parties back a month before they’re up for renewal – about the time they are receiving renewal notices.  X-dating is easier than ever because people have been inundated with solicitations for auto insurance and realize it’s a competitive market.

Q:  How do you determine who to call?

A:  I lease a Cole’s Directory and concentrate on four of the suburbs close to the Flinn Agency.  It’s interesting that I can call one street and get no takers and then call the same street 10 months later and it’s a whole different story.  The point is to contact people. Those who aren’t actively shopping for insurance usually have clean records and are the type of risk ERIE wants.

Q:  When is the best time to work the phone?

A:  Evenings are extremely successful for me between 6:30 and 9.  Some nights go so well I hate to quit, but I never call past 9 p.m.   I find Monday nights are an especially great time because fraternal organizations and clubs rarely plan things then.  You can find interested people anytime.  I’ve found leads calling in the middle of the afternoon, Saturday morning and Friday night.  If you don’t have an appointment with someone else, pick up the phone!

Q:  How many interested parties do you get during a night of work?

A:  I can contact 50 people in a two-hour period and will typically get 10 very interested parties.  I concentrate on getting an x-date and then moving on.  If the person is extremely interested, I get the specifics from his or her declaration pages and then work out an apples-to-apples comparison.  And, because of ERIE’s prices and our agency’s service, if I can compare rates, I can sell.  I sell to 50 percent of the people I quote – a high percentage for any salesperson.  It’s due to persistence and timing.

Q:  Some Agents have “phone reluctance” because they fear hang-ups or rudeness.  How do you deal with the inevitable rejection?

A:  When people tell me they aren’t interested, I don’t think of it as rejection; I think of it as bad timing.  It’s just a matter of whether people are concerned about their insurance rates at the time you call.  And I find people are actually friendly, not rude or nasty.  It’s either “Yes, I’m interested,” or “No, thank you.”  The more you do it, the more proficient you’ll become.  Eventually, you’ll love telemarketing as much as I do!

Sidebar:  The Do’s and Don’ts of Telemarketing

Do’s

  • Do be sincere and straightforward

  • Do get x-dates

  • Do enunciate

  • Do move quickly

  • Do follow up with a business card

  • Do stay in your office’s neighborhood

  • Do use the competitive market to your advantage

Don’ts

  • Don’t take it personally

  • Don’t call past 9 p.m.

  • Don’t talk too fast

  • Don’t waste time with someone who seems very committed to his or her present carrier.

  •  Don’t put if off any longer – just do it!

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Donna Kozik
(619) 297-1749
Donna@DonnaKozik.com

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